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10月27日托福獨立寫作真題范文:城市,你發展這么快,好嗎??
2019-11-06 11:15   作者:新航道   閱讀量:

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  2019.10.27 獨立寫作題目

   “Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The fast development of our cities has a positive effect on the development of society. ”


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  寫作范文

  Introduction

  略

  Body

  讓步:是議論文的關鍵技巧。為什么呢?顯得公平。還能湊字。

  The exponentially developing cities may be so attractive that many people migrate there. 句子“減肥”,減去句子里的贅述。→ Theexponentially developing cities may attract many migrants. This may seem fine. ← 暗示讓步。However, this may also lead to regional imbalance between those cities and non-urban areas.立即舉例映證。→ This is taking place in China, where large cities have population spill and the hometowns of those migrantdwellers are left vacant. 然后再回到道理,做段落總結。→ It is certainlyundesirable. 舉例映證為什么undesirable。→ The country’s cities aredensely populated, suffering overexploitation of resources, and the countryside is desolate, its resources barely utilized.

  接下來,論證positive。

  先總寫一句,沖突于讓步。As a matter of fact, the upside of urbanization is prominent. 然后,段落中心句:總結性的陳述(很有可能是主觀的)。→ Population growth, one of the most important characteristics of the development of cities,← 為什么需要這個同位語,因為同位語里的信息回應了題目。creates the increased need, particularly for the service industry, which is the largest employer of a developed society. 由于前一句表述有些復雜,后面加一句來更直白的說清楚。稱之為(必要的段落)“肥肉”。→ To put it in a simpleway, the development of cities promotes employment. 當道理講清楚的時候,用例子進行進一步論證。舉例的兩個關鍵原則:要么道理沒說到最清楚明白,讀者還會有疑惑;要么段落篇幅不夠。→ (此處例子略)。

  然后,第二個理由。

  段落中心句:總結性的陳述(很有可能是主觀的,并且最傳統的方式是:沒有細節的籠統的)。→ The development of cities raises the level of civilization of society. 在段落中心句之后要用客觀事實去支撐論證。→ Everything in cities runs in an orderly fashion. With the development of cities, urban residents’ awareness of order and accordingly orderly behavior will have influence spreading to small towns and the countryside. As a result, a society becomes more civil. 當道理講清楚的時候,用例子進行進一步論證。可以是(編)個人經歷。→ I am personally witnessing this change and the improvement. In the small town where I live, people, under the influence of the urban lifestyle, are now changing their behavior. They no longer litter or jump the queue, or abuse the car horn.

  Conclusion

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