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10月26日托福獨立寫作真題范文:我找到工作啦!
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  2019.10.26 獨立寫作題目

  Which of the following ways do you think is the best for a person to find a job?

  1. ask opinions or seek advice of others;

  2. write letters or send applications to the companies;

  3. find information on the Internet or publications.


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  寫作范文

  Introduction

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  Body

  否定選項1:

  The first option is not adopted because those people from whom we seek advice may be a small group of people we trust, whose idea pool may be therefore limited not only in the number of ideas but also in the diversity. Although we may ask more people as we need to expand the source of advice, we may however have doubt about their opinions, since those people may not be as trustworthy as the small group of people we think of immediately. ← 就用“講道理”來論證。


  否定選項2:

  否定選項2的時候,并不需要刻板地按照否定選項1的論證邏輯來。也就是說論證方式和篇幅是可以有區別的。

  具體請看:

  If we opt for the second choice, we have one clear target or a few, and if our applications are accepted, we may find the wanted job. 立即出現例子去論證 → For example, one of my friends who had always wanted to work for the Nike Company wrote numerous letters to the company’s recruitment department and eventually got a job. That was pleasant experience for sure. 例子里的轉折部分用來否定選項2,那么前面的部分就是段落內部的讓步,接下來出現論證重點(否定選項2)。→ However, this approach did not work for many other friends of mine. Theyfailed because the companies they admire did not havevacancies for which they are suited. Obviously, they would not wait until the companies had jobs that would suit them, and instead, they settled for working for other companies.← 例子一直到段落結束,本段落的主要論證方式就是“舉例子”。


  肯定選項3:

  The third choice is therefore most ideal and practical. It is an apparent advantage that there is a great deal of information on the Internet or publications of various forms and the information is sorted. Job seekers are not only provided with a broad range of choice, they also benefit from the classification that narrows the suitability down to a more possible range of options.← 仿佛論證可以結束了,因為道理挺簡單易懂的。但是,別急。巧了,可以順延上一段的例子對這一段的道理進行論證 → Actually, those friends of mine who did not succeed by trying the second way found jobs by browsing the recruitment information on the Internet and newspapers, and gladly, many of the jobs are quite satisfactory.

  Conclusion

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