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7月28日托福獨立寫作真題范文
2019-08-14 16:38   作者:新航道   閱讀量:

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  2019年7月28日 獨立寫作題目

  “Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

  Primary school students (aged 5-10) should do no more than 30 minutes of homework per night because they already get enough instructions at school during the day.”

 

  寫作范文

     【思路】 “夠了”。因為:

  一、孩子的腦子應付不了太多功課;

  二、不能讓作業打擊孩子的學習興趣和意愿;

  三、老師也應付不來那么多要批改的作業吧。

  Introduction

  1、 我在討論什么(論題)。

  2、 我在這個論題中的立場是什么。

  達到這兩個目的就好,不要冗長拖沓。

  Although homework is necessary as it is to make sure that child students revisit things taught in the class, the load should be within a small amount. The proposition that the amount should not exceed 30 minutes of work is logical and adoptable.

  First, a child’s mind is unable to deal with homework that takes a long time. [接下來,要么會解釋,要么會舉例,要么同時解釋和舉例。如果同時解釋和舉例,沒有絕對先后順序。就這個點而言,用解釋去論證更佳。]Children usually have short attention spans. If the assignments require a long span of focus, children will get absent-minded and, as a result, learn nothing. In addition, although children may be forced to concentrate and manage to do so, they will get tired, andfatigue does not promote learning and instead inhibits it. [接下來舉例子么?其實可以不舉例,因為解釋夠清楚了。]

  Homework is not to make children suffer but to encourage children to experience what they learn. If the load is heavy and the time is lengthy, child students’ interest in learning and patience will wear thin and eventually wear off. For instance, [完全可以講述個人經歷,別編纂Tom還是Jerry。]when I was in the elementary school, the math teacher always assigned too much homework to the students. As a matter of fact, the large amounts were not useful in strengthening my numeracy skills butcounterproductive. Doing the work was like a torture, and with my interest in the subject lost soon, I failed in math. In fact, I have since been weak in counting and calculating.

  【第三點,此處略。我們換用互動的方式來:有心的讀者可以把自己的寫作嘗試發在留言區,作者會去給出評價。】

  There is no denying that homework is necessary because child students need to reflect on their learning—the successes and deficiencies—during the day. However, the amount must be reasonable and small, and the length of 30 minutes may be just fine.

  ▲ Conclusion可以是introduction的改寫。

  ▲ 不要過分重復主體部分已經陳述到很清楚細致的內容。

  ▲ 總的說來,避免冗長拖沓。


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